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crow_daw 07-05-2003 03:17 PM

I Don't Miss You.
 
I don't miss you.
I don't miss having you in my world.
I don't miss you.
I don't miss not being able to speak to other girls.

I don't miss you.
I don't miss never knowing what you're up to.
I don't miss you.
I don't miss telling you I love you.

I don't miss you.
I don't miss you not saying what was on your mind.
I don't miss you.
I don't miss feeling beneath you all the time.

I don't miss you.
I don't miss being treated like a child.
I don't miss you.
I don't miss making you smile.

I don't miss you.
I don't miss feeling safe from harm.
I don't miss you.
I don't miss you being in my arms.

I don't miss you.
I don't miss actually NOT feeling completely black.
I don't miss you.
Please come back.

mirevolver 07-05-2003 05:07 PM

Yeah, been there before.

Minx 07-07-2003 01:00 PM

I like the ending and the contradiction throughout.
Nice work!

GoldenOuroboros 07-07-2003 02:32 PM

That's like the poem in the movie '10 things I hate about you'
:D

crow_daw 07-07-2003 04:22 PM

Never seen it, but I've seen The Taming of the Shrew in the theatre, although I'm sure they're nothing alike.

*Nikki* 07-07-2003 04:38 PM

Different. Nice rhythm going there.

Eowyn_Vala 07-07-2003 08:41 PM

I like it! A lot! Been there too! I didn't like it much! But I do like how you expressed it!

J.R.V.A. 07-08-2003 06:09 AM

Thank you. I like this a lot

guypunkr 07-08-2003 09:31 PM

I've said it before, I'll say it again: Love is a joke with no punch line.

That was very good Crow. I hope we all get to see more of your work soon.

starlite 07-08-2003 09:36 PM

I just went through that a few days ago. . . Wouldnt it be nice to just know who you should be with

best wishes

troit 07-09-2003 06:45 AM

Been there... there now... moved on...

sarcasmo 07-16-2003 12:52 PM

haha, that was great. Soooo been there. And back. And there. And back. Hmmmmm.

MaGlC_MaN 02-13-2004 04:38 PM

I don't miss not having read this poem,
I'm just kidding, I love it just as much as ocean foam!


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