![]() |
I Don't Miss You.
I don't miss you.
I don't miss having you in my world. I don't miss you. I don't miss not being able to speak to other girls. I don't miss you. I don't miss never knowing what you're up to. I don't miss you. I don't miss telling you I love you. I don't miss you. I don't miss you not saying what was on your mind. I don't miss you. I don't miss feeling beneath you all the time. I don't miss you. I don't miss being treated like a child. I don't miss you. I don't miss making you smile. I don't miss you. I don't miss feeling safe from harm. I don't miss you. I don't miss you being in my arms. I don't miss you. I don't miss actually NOT feeling completely black. I don't miss you. Please come back. |
Yeah, been there before.
|
I like the ending and the contradiction throughout.
Nice work! |
That's like the poem in the movie '10 things I hate about you'
:D |
Never seen it, but I've seen The Taming of the Shrew in the theatre, although I'm sure they're nothing alike.
|
Different. Nice rhythm going there.
|
I like it! A lot! Been there too! I didn't like it much! But I do like how you expressed it!
|
Thank you. I like this a lot
|
I've said it before, I'll say it again: Love is a joke with no punch line.
That was very good Crow. I hope we all get to see more of your work soon. |
I just went through that a few days ago. . . Wouldnt it be nice to just know who you should be with
best wishes |
Been there... there now... moved on...
|
haha, that was great. Soooo been there. And back. And there. And back. Hmmmmm.
|
I don't miss not having read this poem,
I'm just kidding, I love it just as much as ocean foam! |
All times are GMT -8. The time now is 08:47 PM. |
Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.7
Copyright ©2000 - 2025, vBulletin Solutions, Inc.
Search Engine Optimization by vBSEO 3.6.0 PL2
© 2002-2012 Tilted Forum Project