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your own poetry
I seen many threads about poetry, but none on sharing your own poetry. So if I am wrong and there was already a thread on poetry, I'm sorry I'm still new at this.
This is for expressing yourself, please don't hold any poems back for fear of being ridiculed or sharing too much. Now keep in mind my first poem was from when I was a lot younger and after all my hair had fallen out because of chemotherapy Hair My hair is gone, it all fell out. "I miss it I miss it" is what I shout My hair doesn't like me, it all ran away. Now its growing back it BETTER STAY!! Growing Others gave up, but no, not she And there she stands for all to see. She's had her share of troubles and woes. But she made it threw and still she grows. Tears Tears are falling like a rainy day, I can not stop for I'm releasing my pain. Leave me alone, please go away, I need your help but you can not stay. I'm bringing you down with my pain, leaning on you, pushing you away. Why wont you leave, you've suffered enough? I need to stand on my own, even though it is tough. Those were my first poems!! Now it is your turn. |
I don't do much poetry, per se...
Instead, I present "Lyrics by P.o.A" Poetry in a sense, yes? Verse 1 You were born into a generation, Bred in procrastination, Can you see the connotations? Can you hear it? Can you feel it? Taken from us what was ours, Before the card was even charged, Expectations have been enlarged. We can't meet them. We won't heed them. Our way of life has been bombarded, Our right to win has been discarded, Our feeding fire has been retarded. Give it back. We'll take it back. It's a war, they're on the winning side, We can't run and we can't hide, All our outs have been denied. We can fight it. We can beat it. Bridge You ask me about my mom, You ask me about my dad, These are the role models that I have. Out on the street, Stuck on the pipe, And you look down upon my life? Chorus We are bred of the disadvantaged youth. What does that say about us? Verse 2 They ask us to justify, The morals that we live by, While they themselves cannot deny, They birthed us. They raised us. They look down on our claims, Yet they gave us all our names, Forced us to play their games. ?????? We're expected to take a shot, At the things our parents could not, Learn the lessons we weren't taught. ????? Now we pay for their mistakes, We can never catch a break, Nothing left for us to take. We can fight it. We can beat it. The question marks are because I'm not quite finished... Furthermore, here's a haiku I just wrote about DaniGirl: Puts down the sweet juice, Like a fish in the water, ...We will pass tonight I love haiku poems... |
Awww, I feel special now!!!!!
---------- Post added at 02:04 AM ---------- Previous post was at 01:30 AM ---------- Ok some of my Emo poems Broken Child The broken body of a beaten child. The mother says nothing, the doctors don't care. The Child is gone no feeling of pain, some people would say this is not fare, this is insane. The neighbors all watch and do nothing at all. As the father doesn't stop, as the child falls. The crime is clear for everyone to see, the child is dead the parents flee. Who is to blame the father or mother? they sit in court and blame eachother. They both are in jail, the papers are filed the charge is for the Broken Child. ---------- Post added at 02:53 AM ---------- Previous post was at 02:04 AM ---------- Unwanted Unwanted, mistreated, ripping, torn I fall apart My heart is sinking, drowning in blood. Emotional, lonely, Ripping, torn I fall apart. Pointed, poked touched, used, Im nothing to YOU Feelings So many feelings deep inside, a lot of guilt I can not hide. The pain is enough to tare me down, Why cant I be tough, like I know deep down? Its eating at me inside to out. I want to keep it secret but I cant help but shout. Sorry, got board and wanted to post more poems, an d Im a little drunk |
It's Nobody's Business
It's nobody's business if I smile or cry, it's nobody's business if I live or die. It's nobody's business if I think of suicide, it's nobody's business if I dig a hole and die. I am my own person, I am me, leave me alone, just let me be. It's nobody's business if I smile or cry, it's nobody's business if I live or die. ---------- Post added at 10:44 PM ---------- Previous post was at 10:42 PM ---------- Well no one else is posting poems so I decided to post another, I know really Emo. But if you lived with my crazy family you would understand. |
I was asked to write a poem for a friend: a collection they are putting together called A Generation Of Cinderellas. It's called:
the ideal woman. I am alarmed I guess What a well-placed name In my used dress shirt and vest They’re being commandeered for the day Lingered smile. Calm eyes and limbs Paint fading on her face Where’s the evidence of my childhood whims, The oft-timed line: the thrill of the chase. Grains of dust swirl round my head The sun outgrows the trees Those shafts and rays are blinding still Proof that even with sun, nothing comes for free The labour of man is met outside Their machinery huffs and sighs The door jam cracks as she walks through, I casually meet her eyes Coffee purrs and trots along Endearing. Dependant. Floors and shoes sing their song I remove them to amend it. Morning hypnosis does its waltz “I’m staring at nothing; really” character in chipped hand-me-down mugs We attempt, and fail, to converse freely. I profess I have a tale She’s determined to chase it (down) But even though I try my best Without caffeine I simply sit, blink, and frown Hands are colder then before They drift across my own I imagine this my eventual kingdom This old couch, my contemporary throne. I wonder what my parents think I mean, they’re still young enough to grow old with me I hardly pass by their view anymore I consider what sort of man they see They look beyond my dark blue sight Which is curiously safe and swell My mind races to years from now Where you do the same as well And then it hits me; I see it clear as glass Or as much as my disease allows I’m falling in love with the idea of you Caused by misfiring chemicals and a nights worth of spirited vows I’m not in love with you at all And yet I sing a grifter’s tune Not aware a mask is there a promise to see you soon. still I spend my days and nights Wondering why I’m so misplaced Pining for this ideal woman who, eventually, furthers my distaste When it’s gone, I start to slip A life of lost and found All this needless circling the strip Destined to never touch the ground. [i'm only half as terrible a person as this. I think.] enjoy, taylor. |
I enjoyed that. :)
Okay, I'll play. Wrote this a year or so ago. I am by no means a poet, though... ** tie me down I'm feeling violent wanna bite and scratch and fuck and scream later, you can love me with tender kisses, gentle shivers but now, I'm feeling violent so tie me down. ** |
Great poem, thanks for sharing!!
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A new one from the same collection:
At The Ballet It’s a sin we all commit Makes a communist of me And from my stories I omit This sad and youthful spree This car is smaller then before Artistry bred of hands and heat Our ballet turns into a war Our bunkers, these dusty bucket seats And yet without opposition We still fight for our lives War’s gone from rightful expedition Now, a way to pass my time What's worse is as much as I can give I can’t seem to get enough “20’s when you’re supposed to live” But I’ve become a lush Admittedly I do enjoy In a naive way This is just part of the dance A need to for some ballet When it’s over we sort of bow Though no one claps aloud And no one begs for signatures Still, it’s implied I should be proud I feel I must confess I fear against the grain This stage is not what I’d have guessed Nor the lack of pain The longer it demands devotion The less I seem to care Simply going through the motions The footwork and the flair And although it seems this art’s my fate Experience might make me adept Or is it that I can’t differentiate The performer from the steps taylor. |
I awoke to the sound of traffic
and sunshine flooding the room. The door was wide open beside the bed, and I knew it was you who had left it that way—the cats were off the hook. I know you think the fresh air and sunshine is only good for me, but I don't think I could have done the same to you: leaving an open door, letting the world in on you as you slept. Maybe that's the problem. Am I shutting you away? I should be bringing you to see the world, but our world is shrink-wrapped into this tiny apartment—stale dated. I've become oblivious to dates, and the sunlight is passing us by. I don't want it to be too late for you to see what there is to see in this life. I want to open the door while you dream, as you do to me. [A spontaneous poem based on the recollection of a sensation upon waking on a recent morning.] |
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