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Old 07-01-2003, 10:16 PM   #1 (permalink)
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(A little free verse off the top of my head.)

a ghost of the future, I hope
she who draws my gaze from the road
my smiles are all for you
and laughs too for your hearing pleasure
as they bounce off the walls of my empty room
you've come back through time
keeping me company, warming your seat in my heart
my hidden gold which nobody sees
that makes them wonder how I get by
when I feel you there beside me all along
time is my only worry
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Old 07-02-2003, 07:08 AM   #2 (permalink)
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You should look at the top of that head more often, and post some more. This is really good, thanks for sharing.
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Old 07-02-2003, 04:02 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Well you don't post much here, but when you do, you do it with a completeness that leaves me in awe!
Thank you for one more...I await the next.
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Old 07-02-2003, 05:27 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Excellent boss. As always....you have so much to give.
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Old 07-03-2003, 11:17 AM   #5 (permalink)
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You really should post more often.....such great work.
Thank you for giving yet one more part of yourself to us.
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Old 07-17-2003, 10:10 AM   #6 (permalink)
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I want to comment on this piece, saying what i liked exactly about it, but I can't say. It just all fits together.

It is so relaxing and gives me an almost nastalgic feeling (i dunno how to spell that).
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Old 08-01-2003, 07:01 AM   #7 (permalink)
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I like this piece. I know that I will continue to think about it for quite some time.
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Old 08-01-2003, 10:08 AM   #8 (permalink)
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keeping me company, warming your seat in my heart
I love that line...i've got people like that, with reserved seating, front row...even if they've been gone too long.

Great images and great emotion...
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Old 08-02-2003, 10:35 AM   #9 (permalink)
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great post halx, and thank you for this place in the universe where we can come to share ourselves.
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