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What Can I Want?
I dedicate this to all the Dizzy Broads out there.
What Can I Want? what do i want what can i do what do i want to do what should i want i want something to do i can do anything i dont want anything i dont know what i want I Want Someone to hold to see to feel to think of to be with to be there to do anything to want something To Want Me to want them to want to be to be with them to be there for them To Be be like a bee like a busy bee buzz busy bee buzz around honey for some honey that honey my honey our honey there's honey Like A Bee some bee honey bee you be my bee Busy Bee busy bee honey bee i be a bee I Want A Dizzy Bee |
Well now, that was fun to read...out loud... :)
Try it...3 times, fast and out loud.... |
well i just started writting it and thats what it evolved into. kinda dark in the begining but it turned out good
*read the lines that are capitalized **dizzy broads are a bunch of my female friends (dizzy is an inside joke) which makes it somehwat meaningful and funny at the end |
Heh, funny you should mention to read the capitalized lines...I tend to look for things like that and I had already done so. In addition, they stand out on their own which drew my eye. It was a fun read. You should "just start writing" more often. :)
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thanx :)
i will, have some more stuff to post. |
I really enjoyed reading this. Great work!
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Nice work. I like the hidden meaning. Thanks for sharing
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Well that was unexpected.
Nice job, you made me smile. |
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