What do you think?
 

http://o31.net/

This is my cousins' first foray into the world of comics...

Please be gentle!

HG

http://www.jackandketch.com/o31_xmasspecial_small.jpg

Love the site style and the comics are pretty well drawn too!

Might have to read the whole thing from the start to understand though....

***constructive criticism ahead***

I like the overall feel of the site itself. However, for comic art, I'd reccomend redrawing the artwork in ink, making all shadows a 100% black, then coloring it. I think the raw artistic talent is there, but seeing a comic that is nothing but pencil lines that get colored in will never be taken seriously. There is a certian "recipe for success" that when not followed, makes for an uphill battle.