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Old 02-10-2005, 08:44 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Portrait of a girl I am infatuated with.

It needs work, but I am burnt out. this is after 6 hours.

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Old 02-10-2005, 11:33 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Very nice work man. In only six hours? I wish I could do that! :P Guess is doesn't help that I am lazy! lol

Gratz man, keep up the good work!
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Old 02-10-2005, 11:44 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Awww does she know?

It looks pretty damn good as it is animosity! The only thing it lacks is a pair of eyelids

I take it you're not entirely satisfied with it as it is. What else do you want to add or change?
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Old 02-11-2005, 12:20 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Great mate!


Work on it till you're satisfied then give it to her Only advice I can give you
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Old 02-11-2005, 03:50 AM   #5 (permalink)
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yea... I can't seem to get the eyes how I want them. Normally eyes are my easiest task. I'd also like to work on the hair. She has gorgeous hair.

Yes she knows. She asked me to do it last week(I'm a sucker for a girl with a pretty face).

Thanks for the feedback.

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Old 02-11-2005, 03:56 AM   #6 (permalink)
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yea... I can't seem to get the eyes how I want them. Normally eyes are my easiest task. I'd also like to work on the hair. She has gorgeous hair.

Yes she knows. She asked me to do it last week(I'm a sucker for a girl with a pretty face).
Cute

The eyes are great except they don't have eyelids. And as for the hair I also think it's fine the way it is but then again I haven't seen her hair so I can't say if you need to work some more on it or not.
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Old 02-11-2005, 04:13 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Cute

The eyes are great except they don't have eyelids. And as for the hair I also think it's fine the way it is but then again I haven't seen her hair so I can't say if you need to work some more on it or not.
Thanks
I am just really self-conscious about this drawing because I really like her. I know it is one of my better works, but I dont want her to see it and be like.... "eew..."
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Old 02-11-2005, 04:44 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Yeah I know what you mean by that comment.. alot of 'that' kind of work I've done and just hidden and said that I couldn't finish it cause I didn't know how they were gonna react.. oh well.. >_<
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Old 02-11-2005, 04:50 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Yeah I know what you mean by that comment.. alot of 'that' kind of work I've done and just hidden and said that I couldn't finish it cause I didn't know how they were gonna react.. oh well.. >_<
same here... Story of my life.

I'm working on it now. I am supposed to be preparing for a speech, but that is another story.

It's getting better. She will be disappointed if I do not give it to her.
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Old 02-11-2005, 11:26 AM   #10 (permalink)
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Nice work. One thing you might want to try with the eyes is toning them down very slightly. Even though eyes are described as "white", even when a person's eyes are very bright it's usually a mid to low grey/blue/red colour. Even if someone's eyes are wide open and in fairly direct light, there tends to be a lot of shade from the eyelids/lashes/brows and the curve of the eye itself.
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Old 02-11-2005, 11:43 AM   #11 (permalink)
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Nice work. One thing you might want to try with the eyes is toning them down very slightly. Even though eyes are described as "white", even when a person's eyes are very bright it's usually a mid to low grey/blue/red colour. Even if someone's eyes are wide open and in fairly direct light, there tends to be a lot of shade from the eyelids/lashes/brows and the curve of the eye itself.
Thanks. That is a very good point. I am done though. I got mad and quit working on it.

this is the final product.



I'm working on a dark drawing now.
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Old 02-11-2005, 12:32 PM   #12 (permalink)
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If she's not pleased with that, you have no reason to be with her.
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Old 02-11-2005, 05:09 PM   #13 (permalink)
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I can see your attraction to her. I like both the finished and unfinished product man. Good luck I hope she likes it although looking at it myself I'm sure she will man.

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Old 02-14-2005, 03:05 PM   #14 (permalink)
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Awesome! You will have to let us know how she liked it. I imagine she has to be one of the most critical observers as it is a painting of her. Though, I can't imagine how she could be dissapointed in that! Great job!

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Hmm... Just read the other thread about this girl. Sounds like you have your head on straight about the whole thing. Hey, if nothing else, you have a whole lot more people out there (I'm one) who really respect your art.

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Old 02-14-2005, 10:28 PM   #15 (permalink)
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Awesome! You will have to let us know how she liked it. I imagine she has to be one of the most critical observers as it is a painting of her. Though, I can't imagine how she could be dissapointed in that! Great job!

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Hmm... Just read the other thread about this girl. Sounds like you have your head on straight about the whole thing. Hey, if nothing else, you have a whole lot more people out there (I'm one) who really respect your art.
thanks

She really did like it. She was excited. The girl is really a great girl, but I do not have the patience for w/e mind games she is trying to play with me.

Here is another portrait I did for my friend. He needed a girft for his gf this Vday, so I scribbled this up real quick(several hours).
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Old 02-16-2005, 08:59 PM   #16 (permalink)
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Great pictures. My question is do u have them sit there why u do it or do u take a picture then do it from that?
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