genetically engineered girl in a tube - Tilted Forum Project Discussion Community

marsfyre · 01-29-2005, 11:59 PM

This was a test of sorts using some new techniques. I spent roughly an hour on layout and an hour on drawing. crits welcome.

noGon · 01-30-2005, 12:11 AM

looks awesome

degrawj · 01-30-2005, 09:32 AM

that's pretty freaking wicked man. i don't really have much to critique.

marsfyre · 01-30-2005, 12:48 PM

Thanks for the nice compliments!

thriolith · 01-30-2005, 09:32 PM

Absolutely love the comic book feel, heh. Nice work!

the boss · 02-01-2005, 09:51 AM

pretty damn good..

Giant Hamburger · 02-01-2005, 11:13 AM

Excellent tube and I like the effect of the piping that is behind the glass in the background. There is a line at mid tube that looks like the fluid level but doesn't fit with her hair and the bubbles. Besides that I think it's really cool.

clavus · 02-01-2005, 12:37 PM

I like you you used the screens to accent the shading.

krwlz · 02-02-2005, 06:17 PM

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Originally Posted by Giant Hamburger

Excellent tube and I like the effect of the piping that is behind the glass in the background. There is a line at mid tube that looks like the fluid level but doesn't fit with her hair and the bubbles. Besides that I think it's really cool.

Im going to afree with GH here... That line really throws things off... Also, her right breast seems just ever so slightly smaller.

Opposite that man, friggin awesome!

Nancy · 02-09-2005, 02:32 AM

Hey Marsfyre,

Nice to see you posting again!

I agree with thriolith: the comic book feel is the best part about this drawing IMO.

The theme and the lines are world-class marsfyre. Bravo!

However I'm not too fond of her arms. Her thighs have a healthy thickness for a girl but her arms are too thin really – especially around her elbow on her left arm!

As krwlz said her right breast is too small compared to the other. The left one should've been lifted more and you should've exposed around 70% less of it as the body doesn't turn nearly enough to the right to expose that much of it.

01-29-2005, 11:59 PM	#1 (permalink)
marsfyre Psycho Location: somewhere	genetically engineered girl in a tube This was a test of sorts using some new techniques. I spent roughly an hour on layout and an hour on drawing. crits welcome.

01-30-2005, 09:32 PM	#5 (permalink)
thriolith Insane Location: Toronto	Absolutely love the comic book feel, heh. Nice work! __________________ - Thriolith

02-01-2005, 12:37 PM	#8 (permalink)
clavus pow! Location: NorCal	I like you you used the screens to accent the shading. __________________ Ass, gas or grass. Nobody rides for free.

02-09-2005, 02:32 AM	#10 (permalink)
Nancy Femme Fatale Location: Elysium	Hey Marsfyre, Nice to see you posting again! I agree with thriolith: the comic book feel is the best part about this drawing IMO. The theme and the lines are world-class marsfyre. Bravo! However I'm not too fond of her arms. Her thighs have a healthy thickness for a girl but her arms are too thin really – especially around her elbow on her left arm! As krwlz said her right breast is too small compared to the other. The left one should've been lifted more and you should've exposed around 70% less of it as the body doesn't turn nearly enough to the right to expose that much of it. __________________ I have all the characteristics of a human being: blood, flesh, skin, hair; but not a single, clear, identifiable emotion, except for greed and disgust. Something horrible is happening inside of me and I don't know why. My nightly bloodlust has overflown into my days. I feel lethal, on the verge of frenzy. I think my mask of sanity is about to slip.

01-30-2005, 12:11 AM	#2 (permalink)
noGon Tilted	looks awesome

01-30-2005, 09:32 AM	#3 (permalink)
degrawj I'm still waiting... Location: West Linn, OR	that's pretty freaking wicked man. i don't really have much to critique.

01-30-2005, 12:48 PM	#4 (permalink)
marsfyre Psycho Location: somewhere	Thanks for the nice compliments!

02-01-2005, 09:51 AM	#6 (permalink)
the boss Crazy Location: on the coast	pretty damn good..

02-01-2005, 11:13 AM	#7 (permalink)
Giant Hamburger Gastrolithuanian Location: low-velocity Earth orbit	Excellent tube and I like the effect of the piping that is behind the glass in the background. There is a line at mid tube that looks like the fluid level but doesn't fit with her hair and the bubbles. Besides that I think it's really cool.