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marsfyre 01-29-2005 11:59 PM

genetically engineered girl in a tube
 
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This was a test of sorts using some new techniques. I spent roughly an hour on layout and an hour on drawing. crits welcome.

noGon 01-30-2005 12:11 AM

looks awesome :thumbsup:

degrawj 01-30-2005 09:32 AM

that's pretty freaking wicked man. i don't really have much to critique.

marsfyre 01-30-2005 12:48 PM

Thanks for the nice compliments! :D

thriolith 01-30-2005 09:32 PM

Absolutely love the comic book feel, heh. Nice work!

the boss 02-01-2005 09:51 AM

pretty damn good..

Giant Hamburger 02-01-2005 11:13 AM

Excellent tube and I like the effect of the piping that is behind the glass in the background. There is a line at mid tube that looks like the fluid level but doesn't fit with her hair and the bubbles. Besides that I think it's really cool.

clavus 02-01-2005 12:37 PM

I like you you used the screens to accent the shading.

krwlz 02-02-2005 06:17 PM

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Originally Posted by Giant Hamburger
Excellent tube and I like the effect of the piping that is behind the glass in the background. There is a line at mid tube that looks like the fluid level but doesn't fit with her hair and the bubbles. Besides that I think it's really cool.

Im going to afree with GH here... That line really throws things off... Also, her right breast seems just ever so slightly smaller.

Opposite that man, friggin awesome!

Nancy 02-09-2005 02:32 AM

Hey Marsfyre,

Nice to see you posting again! :)

I agree with thriolith: the comic book feel is the best part about this drawing IMO.

The theme and the lines are world-class marsfyre. Bravo! :D :thumbsup:

However I'm not too fond of her arms. Her thighs have a healthy thickness for a girl but her arms are too thin really – especially around her elbow on her left arm!

As krwlz said her right breast is too small compared to the other. The left one should've been lifted more and you should've exposed around 70% less of it as the body doesn't turn nearly enough to the right to expose that much of it.


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