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gallopingwanker · 12-08-2004, 09:10 PM

here are some logos i've done for arteis.net, you get "hired" on and pick your jobs and get paid. good stuff.

visit my uber logo page

exizldelfuego · 12-08-2004, 10:33 PM

bug.jpg
chickensymbol.jpg
gymquestpointy.jpg
gymquestswoosh.jpg
ten50square.jpg
These are my favorites. Real nice job.

I'm rather intrigued by the whole "identity design" aspects of graphic/digital design. It's something we touch every now and again in my classes. I wish I had more experience with it. By and large, these designs are clean and refined. I dig 'em.
Some semi-educated suggestions:

gibsondrip.jpg: maybe a little bit more contrast between SUPPLY and INC.

gibsonshadow.jpg: Seems like you could bring IBSON closer to the G, and maybe even bring the G over a little to left so that is visually syncs more with that over-hanging tail of the S andthat should bring the right-hand side of the N in GIBSON more in line with the rhs of Y in SUPPLY

glenblue.jpg: neat idea, but I'm not sure how successful it is here.

glenhouse.jpg: what if the two text lines were flushly right-justified? And then the box could be cropped to fit? The text is kinda floaty right now. Nice contrast of thick and thin with Glen Schofield, though.

gymquestdots.jpg: Nice typeface and nice use of spacing, and nice hierarchy with the dots. But be careful with those dots. They're a little too reminiscent of recent Microsoft stylings for my comfort.

PS. I really like your site design.

gallopingwanker · 12-09-2004, 04:37 AM

thanks for the crits man! i appreciate that you took the time to look them over

slimsam1 · 12-09-2004, 10:51 AM

Wow! Those are impressive. Great work!

Lewis · 12-09-2004, 03:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by exizldelfuego

bug.jpg
chickensymbol.jpg
gymquestpointy.jpg
gymquestswoosh.jpg
ten50square.jpg
These are my favorites. Real nice job.

I'm rather intrigued by the whole "identity design" aspects of graphic/digital design. It's something we touch every now and again in my classes. I wish I had more experience with it. By and large, these designs are clean and refined. I dig 'em.
Some semi-educated suggestions:

gibsondrip.jpg: maybe a little bit more contrast between SUPPLY and INC.

gibsonshadow.jpg: Seems like you could bring IBSON closer to the G, and maybe even bring the G over a little to left so that is visually syncs more with that over-hanging tail of the S andthat should bring the right-hand side of the N in GIBSON more in line with the rhs of Y in SUPPLY

glenblue.jpg: neat idea, but I'm not sure how successful it is here.

glenhouse.jpg: what if the two text lines were flushly right-justified? And then the box could be cropped to fit? The text is kinda floaty right now. Nice contrast of thick and thin with Glen Schofield, though.

gymquestdots.jpg: Nice typeface and nice use of spacing, and nice hierarchy with the dots. But be careful with those dots. They're a little too reminiscent of recent Microsoft stylings for my comfort.

PS. I really like your site design.

Actually, in my experience, the logo is only the very tip of the iceberg. You shouldn't get too obsessed with 'designing logos' as to design successful logos you have to have a deep appreciation of the company/organization, its place in the world its products and marketing strategy. Then you can visually engineer a logo that matches all aspects.

NegativeNine · 12-09-2004, 03:26 PM

... I thought it said "Legos."

These are my favorites:
bugsun.jpg
chickenfast.jpg
chickensymbol.jpg
gibsonshadow.jpg
ten50square.jpg
truckoutline.jpg

I liked most of them... glenblue.jpg and glenhouse.jpg both seem a little bland...

Great work!

thriolith · 12-09-2004, 09:08 PM

bugflame
chickenfast
chickensymbol
ten50perspective

I liked bugflame the best, it has a nice clean simple look to it.

12-08-2004, 09:10 PM	#1 (permalink)
gallopingwanker At the Lemonade Stand Location: in a theater near you!	logos logos LOGOS here are some logos i've done for arteis.net, you get "hired" on and pick your jobs and get paid. good stuff. visit my uber logo page

12-08-2004, 10:33 PM	#2 (permalink)
exizldelfuego Crazy Location: Seattle, WA	bug.jpg chickensymbol.jpg gymquestpointy.jpg gymquestswoosh.jpg ten50square.jpg These are my favorites. Real nice job. I'm rather intrigued by the whole "identity design" aspects of graphic/digital design. It's something we touch every now and again in my classes. I wish I had more experience with it. By and large, these designs are clean and refined. I dig 'em. Some semi-educated suggestions: gibsondrip.jpg: maybe a little bit more contrast between SUPPLY and INC. gibsonshadow.jpg: Seems like you could bring IBSON closer to the G, and maybe even bring the G over a little to left so that is visually syncs more with that over-hanging tail of the S andthat should bring the right-hand side of the N in GIBSON more in line with the rhs of Y in SUPPLY glenblue.jpg: neat idea, but I'm not sure how successful it is here. glenhouse.jpg: what if the two text lines were flushly right-justified? And then the box could be cropped to fit? The text is kinda floaty right now. Nice contrast of thick and thin with Glen Schofield, though. gymquestdots.jpg: Nice typeface and nice use of spacing, and nice hierarchy with the dots. But be careful with those dots. They're a little too reminiscent of recent Microsoft stylings for my comfort. PS. I really like your site design. Last edited by exizldelfuego; 12-08-2004 at 10:56 PM..

12-09-2004, 09:08 PM	#7 (permalink)
thriolith Insane Location: Toronto	bugflame chickenfast chickensymbol ten50perspective I liked bugflame the best, it has a nice clean simple look to it. __________________ - Thriolith

12-09-2004, 04:37 AM	#3 (permalink)
gallopingwanker At the Lemonade Stand Location: in a theater near you!	thanks for the crits man! i appreciate that you took the time to look them over

12-09-2004, 10:51 AM	#4 (permalink)
slimsam1 Crazy	Wow! Those are impressive. Great work!

12-09-2004, 03:26 PM	#6 (permalink)
NegativeNine Tilted	... I thought it said "Legos." These are my favorites: bugsun.jpg chickenfast.jpg chickensymbol.jpg gibsonshadow.jpg ten50square.jpg truckoutline.jpg I liked most of them... glenblue.jpg and glenhouse.jpg both seem a little bland... Great work!