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Desario · 11-27-2004, 05:16 AM

This is my first attempt at posting pictures online. I hope I did this right. Comments are appreciated, good or bad.

Thunderball · 11-27-2004, 10:19 AM

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Originally Posted by Desario

This is my first attempt at posting pictures online. I hope I did this right. Comments are appreciated, good or bad.

some people dont understand, with art there isnt Good or Bad its all Good its just your version of art, in other words its like saying you making a ham sandwich out of the same stuff I made a ham sandwich out of and saying mines good and yours is bad..its just not true. Your art looks great kind of like the Terminateriss

Desario · 11-27-2004, 12:01 PM

I was just hoping if somebody could give me a critique, instead of just a good or bad comment. Sorry, I didn't word that right. Here's something I did in High School a few years back. It's done in watercolor. I neglected the left hand though.

Thunderball · 11-27-2004, 01:08 PM

Okay sorry, it looks great i like the shading on the first and the use of watercolors? and the colors on the second

Desario · 11-28-2004, 04:16 AM

Thank you. Your input is appreciated.

Dizzet · 11-28-2004, 07:57 AM

It looks nice but please make those pictures bigger... We want to see
details!!! well keep posting its nice

Desario · 11-28-2004, 01:44 PM

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Originally Posted by Dizzet

It looks nice but please make those pictures bigger... We want to see
details!!! well keep posting its nice

Absolutely, and thank you for the comments. Here they are:

and the next one:

Dizzet · 11-28-2004, 11:12 PM

Damn its nice love the girls freaky eye

Nancy · 11-29-2004, 12:23 AM

Finally someone else who does water colors as well! You seem to master the art of mixing colors and making shadows. I like the way you've made the lines in the pants by keeping the space open instead of adding white color to it afterwards!

But what's up with the left arm? I see details in the right one but not in the left one?

can I persuade you to post some more of your water color paintings? You see I'm curious to see more of your techniques

Drawing: Love the smooth lines and shadows! But how come she's got one bad eye and indifferent eyebrows? I see that the right side of her jaw is slighty crooked as well. The crooked jaw is the only thing that "bothers" me in this drawing

Desario · 11-29-2004, 04:41 AM

Thank you for the comments, Nancy. I neglected the left hand because I probably was rushed to finish it to turn it in. But the left arm, is supposed to be broken. I've only done watercolor painting when I had access to them in High School, so if I could find some more stuff, I'll definately post it up.

The bad eye shows she's half dead. When people die, they're eyes get sort of "filmy" and lose color. So I was trying to show that in the drawing. As for the jaw, the thick line that comes down to her bottom lip, is her hair. As to why it's crooked, I don't know. I honestly don't remember what I was thinking when I drew her face.

Nancy · 11-29-2004, 06:27 AM

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Originally Posted by Desario

Thank you for the comments, Nancy. I neglected the left hand because I probably was rushed to finish it to turn it in. But the left arm, is supposed to be broken. I've only done watercolor painting when I had access to them in High School, so if I could find some more stuff, I'll definately post it up.

That would be great. Orrrrr you could make some brand new ones!

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Originally Posted by Desario

The bad eye shows she's half dead. When people die, they're eyes get sort of "filmy" and lose color. So I was trying to show that in the drawing. As for the jaw, the thick line that comes down to her bottom lip, is her hair. As to why it's crooked, I don't know. I honestly don't remember what I was thinking when I drew her face.

Half-dead huh? cool

But as the color starts to dissappear does the pupil get filmy like that as well? Doesn't it stay black?

exizldelfuego · 11-29-2004, 11:26 AM

Love the watercolor. Definitely get us some more!

GoldenOuroboros · 11-29-2004, 02:46 PM

Great artwork Desario, if you want to show that she's half dead, perhaps a few more indicators would be good.

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Originally Posted by Nancy

Half-dead huh? cool

But as the color starts to dissappear does the pupil get filmy like that as well? Doesn't it stay black?

I don't think it's the iris that loses it's colour, rather that it's the liquid contained in the eye that goes cloudy.

Desario · 11-30-2004, 01:04 AM

I knew something loses its color, but I wasn't 100% sure what it was in the eye. Unfortunately, I couldn't find another watercolor, but I did manage to find another pencil sketch.

Here it is:

Again, comments are appreciated.

d*d · 11-30-2004, 01:50 AM

v good understanding of ligt dark shading, i'd like to see some background shading as well - get rid of the outline in the left hand side. It looks like it was drawn from a picture, I think you could really do justice to a live model

Nancy · 11-30-2004, 01:51 AM

VERY nice!

Is it just me or is the shadow on top of the nose a bit much to the left?

Desario · 11-30-2004, 12:52 PM

The scanner didn't scan too good. There was some really light shading in the middle of her nose which didn't quite show up.

Thanks for the feedback.

11-27-2004, 05:16 AM	#1 (permalink)
Desario Tilted	First time posting This is my first attempt at posting pictures online. I hope I did this right. Comments are appreciated, good or bad.

11-27-2004, 01:08 PM	#4 (permalink)
Thunderball Tilted Location: California	Okay sorry, it looks great i like the shading on the first and the use of watercolors? and the colors on the second __________________ "I dont know whats in there?!?!but its wierd and pissed off whatever it is !"

11-28-2004, 07:57 AM	#6 (permalink)
Dizzet Psycho Location: Denmark	It looks nice but please make those pictures bigger... We want to see details!!! well keep posting its nice __________________ I am a pretty little Girl

11-28-2004, 11:12 PM	#8 (permalink)
Dizzet Psycho Location: Denmark	Damn its nice love the girls freaky eye __________________ I am a pretty little Girl

11-29-2004, 12:23 AM	#9 (permalink)
Nancy Femme Fatale Location: Elysium	Finally someone else who does water colors as well! You seem to master the art of mixing colors and making shadows. I like the way you've made the lines in the pants by keeping the space open instead of adding white color to it afterwards! But what's up with the left arm? I see details in the right one but not in the left one? can I persuade you to post some more of your water color paintings? You see I'm curious to see more of your techniques Drawing: Love the smooth lines and shadows! But how come she's got one bad eye and indifferent eyebrows? I see that the right side of her jaw is slighty crooked as well. The crooked jaw is the only thing that "bothers" me in this drawing __________________ I have all the characteristics of a human being: blood, flesh, skin, hair; but not a single, clear, identifiable emotion, except for greed and disgust. Something horrible is happening inside of me and I don't know why. My nightly bloodlust has overflown into my days. I feel lethal, on the verge of frenzy. I think my mask of sanity is about to slip.

11-27-2004, 12:01 PM	#3 (permalink)
Desario Tilted	I was just hoping if somebody could give me a critique, instead of just a good or bad comment. Sorry, I didn't word that right. Here's something I did in High School a few years back. It's done in watercolor. I neglected the left hand though.

11-28-2004, 04:16 AM	#5 (permalink)
Desario Tilted	Thank you. Your input is appreciated.

11-29-2004, 04:41 AM	#10 (permalink)
Desario Tilted	Thank you for the comments, Nancy. I neglected the left hand because I probably was rushed to finish it to turn it in. But the left arm, is supposed to be broken. I've only done watercolor painting when I had access to them in High School, so if I could find some more stuff, I'll definately post it up. The bad eye shows she's half dead. When people die, they're eyes get sort of "filmy" and lose color. So I was trying to show that in the drawing. As for the jaw, the thick line that comes down to her bottom lip, is her hair. As to why it's crooked, I don't know. I honestly don't remember what I was thinking when I drew her face.

11-29-2004, 11:26 AM	#12 (permalink)
exizldelfuego Crazy Location: Seattle, WA	Love the watercolor. Definitely get us some more!

11-30-2004, 01:04 AM	#14 (permalink)
Desario Tilted	I knew something loses its color, but I wasn't 100% sure what it was in the eye. Unfortunately, I couldn't find another watercolor, but I did manage to find another pencil sketch. Here it is: Again, comments are appreciated.

11-30-2004, 01:50 AM	#15 (permalink)
d*d Addict	v good understanding of ligt dark shading, i'd like to see some background shading as well - get rid of the outline in the left hand side. It looks like it was drawn from a picture, I think you could really do justice to a live model

11-30-2004, 01:51 AM	#16 (permalink)
Nancy Femme Fatale Location: Elysium	VERY nice! Is it just me or is the shadow on top of the nose a bit much to the left? __________________ I have all the characteristics of a human being: blood, flesh, skin, hair; but not a single, clear, identifiable emotion, except for greed and disgust. Something horrible is happening inside of me and I don't know why. My nightly bloodlust has overflown into my days. I feel lethal, on the verge of frenzy. I think my mask of sanity is about to slip.

11-30-2004, 12:52 PM	#17 (permalink)
Desario Tilted	The scanner didn't scan too good. There was some really light shading in the middle of her nose which didn't quite show up. Thanks for the feedback.