First time posting
 

This is my first attempt at posting pictures online. I hope I did this right. Comments are appreciated, good or bad.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/1733061_943ecbf2af_m.jpg

some people dont understand, with art there isnt Good or Bad its all Good its just your version of art, in other words its like saying you making a ham sandwich out of the same stuff I made a ham sandwich out of and saying mines good and yours is bad..its just not true. Your art looks great kind of like the Terminateriss :thumbsup:

I was just hoping if somebody could give me a critique, instead of just a good or bad comment. Sorry, I didn't word that right. Here's something I did in High School a few years back. It's done in watercolor. I neglected the left hand though.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/1733064_6dd9a9dedb.jpg

Okay sorry, it looks great i like the shading on the first and the use of watercolors? and the colors on the second :)

Thank you. Your input is appreciated.

It looks nice but please make those pictures bigger... We want to see
details!!! well keep posting its nice

Absolutely, and thank you for the comments. Here they are:

http://www.flickr.com/photos/1733061_943ecbf2af_o.jpg

and the next one:

http://www.flickr.com/photos/1733064_6dd9a9dedb_b.jpg

Damn its nice love the girls freaky eye

Finally someone else who does water colors as well! You seem to master the art of mixing colors and making shadows. I like the way you've made the lines in the pants by keeping the space open instead of adding white color to it afterwards! :thumbsup:

But what's up with the left arm? I see details in the right one but not in the left one?

can I persuade you to post some more of your water color paintings? You see I'm curious to see more of your techniques :)

Drawing: Love the smooth lines and shadows! But how come she's got one bad eye and indifferent eyebrows? I see that the right side of her jaw is slighty crooked as well. The crooked jaw is the only thing that "bothers" me in this drawing :)

Thank you for the comments, Nancy. I neglected the left hand because I probably was rushed to finish it to turn it in. But the left arm, is supposed to be broken. I've only done watercolor painting when I had access to them in High School, so if I could find some more stuff, I'll definately post it up.

The bad eye shows she's half dead. When people die, they're eyes get sort of "filmy" and lose color. So I was trying to show that in the drawing. As for the jaw, the thick line that comes down to her bottom lip, is her hair. As to why it's crooked, I don't know. I honestly don't remember what I was thinking when I drew her face.

That would be great. Orrrrr you could make some brand new ones! :)

Half-dead huh? cool :)
But as the color starts to dissappear does the pupil get filmy like that as well? Doesn't it stay black?

Love the watercolor. Definitely get us some more!

Great artwork Desario, if you want to show that she's half dead, perhaps a few more indicators would be good.

I don't think it's the iris that loses it's colour, rather that it's the liquid contained in the eye that goes cloudy.

I knew something loses its color, but I wasn't 100% sure what it was in the eye. Unfortunately, I couldn't find another watercolor, but I did manage to find another pencil sketch.

Here it is:

http://www.flickr.com/photos/1733060_d0bc054910_o.jpg

Again, comments are appreciated.

v good understanding of ligt dark shading, i'd like to see some background shading as well - get rid of the outline in the left hand side. It looks like it was drawn from a picture, I think you could really do justice to a live model

VERY nice! :thumbsup:

Is it just me or is the shadow on top of the nose a bit much to the left?

The scanner didn't scan too good. There was some really light shading in the middle of her nose which didn't quite show up.

Thanks for the feedback.