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04-26-2004, 10:42 PM
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Psycho
Location: Denmark
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Well first of all great work it really looks nice but there is something that bother me because on the first picture you have made these fantastic hands but on the second picture the hands look like somthing drawn by a child...
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04-27-2004, 12:27 AM
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Femme Fatale
Location: Elysium
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*agrees with Dizzet* those hands on the first picture are done nicely!
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04-27-2004, 07:53 AM
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on fire
Location: Atlanta, GA
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yea.. i just didnt spend much time on the 2nd... im actually still working on it. i think ill just take the hand back to sketch because it is not positioned correctly either.
the problem is that i started with the sword instead of the hand... thnx for your comments ill post it in here when im done.  |
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04-27-2004, 12:10 PM
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Nothing
Location: Atlanta, GA
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Yeah man, the hands look a lot better now. I still think the eyes could use a lil work, especially since I know you can draw eyes really well.
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04-28-2004, 03:31 AM
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Psycho
Location: Denmark
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Well thats much better... fi you have time then you schold do this...
-make the Sword more shiny -textures on his flesh, hair and clothes( he looks very flat to me when i look at him..
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04-28-2004, 03:59 AM
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Psycho
Location: Denmark
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Hey just did a quick render of youer picture. Showing how i mean it could look better... Itīs not meant in a negativ way... its just that yo draw good so it could be cool if you got better... and if you dont like that i have maniplulated with youer drawing then im very sorry...
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04-28-2004, 07:40 AM
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on fire
Location: Atlanta, GA
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no no... i welcome any critiques. im am just learning and i really would like to be better. i really like what you have done with the sword and hair. may i ask how you did this? i spent about 8 hours on this thing in photoshop using only the pen tool... i feel like i may be wasting time if there is some other tool i could be using.
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04-28-2004, 10:21 PM
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Psycho
Location: Denmark
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Okay i made the Hair with a brush setting the opacity to about 36% and taking the color that you used at and made it brighter.
Then you can just put some of the color on and when you think there is enoguh coloer on the hair then take the tool called smudge tool( it the finger ) then just drag in the color so it falls with the hair... if you are interestet i could make a toturial on the thing i did...
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04-29-2004, 03:21 AM
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Femme Fatale
Location: Elysium
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what happened to the red eyes? they looked so much better
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04-29-2004, 06:21 AM
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on fire
Location: Atlanta, GA
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thnx Dizzet, i can see how you did that now... but i will not be doing anything else with this drawing. i have already started something else.
i with you Nancy.... but everyone else i showed this to wanted to see something else for the eyes.... im glad to hear that at least one person liked the red |
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04-29-2004, 07:26 AM
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Femme Fatale
Location: Elysium
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Quote:
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I have all the characteristics of a human being: blood, flesh, skin, hair; but not a single, clear, identifiable emotion, except for greed and disgust. Something horrible is happening inside of me and I don't know why. My nightly bloodlust has overflown into my days. I feel lethal, on the verge of frenzy. I think my mask of sanity is about to slip. |
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