MexicanOnABike

animation i made for my computer animation class... it was suposed to be 3 scenes only showing the path... i made this to show the bitch(teacher) that i knew more then her... and i do.

http://www.p357.web1000.com/mosquito19.swf

hope you like it.

also did this one at the starting of the year...

http://www.p357.web1000.com/boatgood.swf

enjoy!

and please post some crits if u have some...

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yakimushi

Both animations look great dude.

The only comment I'd make is that when the scene cuts to the "mosquito point of view" where everything is skewing, that scene is just waaaay too long. I think you could half it and still get the same effect.

bernadette

well, i admire you that you've learned to use flash. keep at it!

the 2nd one, the sailboat, i'll hafta be honest with you, it is painful to view because it simply moves way too slowly.

i don't know flash, so i can't advise you how to speed it up. but i'm sure there must be some frame delay (or other term) that you can adjust.

keep at it! show us more

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GoldenOuroboros

Great work!
Haha.. what'd the teacher say when you showed her? lol..

I agree with bernadette on the sail boat.. it does look abit slow..
Was the sail boat done in MAX then animated in flash using a plugin? O_o

Either way groovey groovey

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macmanmike6100

i thought that both of those were very good; definitely a way to "stick it to 'em"

I don't know why, but they seemed a little bit sluggish on my comp, however (1gHz G4)

MexicanOnABike

sorry about it being slow... i used too much objects in the scenes.
and the teacher is a fucking bitch!!! everyone is just starting flash so it all looks like a 2nd grade kid did the work and she still tells me that its not that good. so i keep telling her to Fuck off! its not helping.

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