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GoldenOuroboros 10-22-2003 04:46 AM

Fae Lurkette
 
http://home.iprimus.com.au/goldenouro/fae.jpg


Max and Photoshop work.. You shoulda seen what I did originally.. that was just shocking :eek: Glad I rethought things over and the way I could do them

Thanks all
Constructive Criticism pleeease
:cool:

analinguist 10-22-2003 05:11 AM

the wings don't seem connected to the picture yet. they look like they are pasted on. you should probably work more with lighting in the picture. the wings seem like they are this glowing eminating light, yet there are barely any shadows cast or light cast on the scene around them. i also don't really like that the girl is right in the center of the picture. it seems like you could crop some excess photo off, or you could position in a different area..

GoldenOuroboros 10-22-2003 05:22 AM

cool thanks.. see what I can do with my extremely limited knowledge.. lol :)

Church 10-22-2003 06:47 AM

I suggest you replace the blue in the middle of the wings with a more similar skintone colour. It will help to blend the wings with the skin. Lastly, I think you might want to add some little mounds to where the wings connect with the skin, it gives more of a natural, 3D feel. Other then that, great start so far.

mb99usa 10-22-2003 06:51 AM

Very cool start. My suggestion would be to subdue the colors on the wings to better match the rest of the lighting in the picture.

yellowgowild 10-22-2003 04:41 PM

Once this is finished it will be great. I can see this gracing the desktops of many monitors.

petergriffin24 10-24-2003 07:01 AM

I love the pic it looks awesome keep up the great work!!

31Friction 10-26-2003 06:41 PM

eh, I like it but as analinguist said, the wings look out of place

GoldenOuroboros 10-26-2003 08:27 PM

Yeah I understand what he is saying.. now that I actually look at the picture as a whole I can see it.. the wings look like they've been stamped on and aren't anywhere connected to the body.. so I'll eventually get around to doing something about that :)

thejoker130 10-29-2003 07:56 PM

ooo pretty! I like very much. Someone with a dream of flying away perhaps?

Aesik 10-29-2003 08:18 PM

If you can figure out how to blend the subject matters better, it will turn out quite nice. But like others have said, the wings just look out of place.

Very nice concept, keep working on it!

bennyb 10-30-2003 04:05 PM

nice max work, keep it up :D

gallopingwanker 10-31-2003 01:01 PM

be sure to post the fixed version when you're done :)

Dilbert1234567 10-31-2003 01:27 PM

wow thats a great job.


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