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Tasu · 09-29-2003, 09:56 PM

8 hours with food and batroom breaks.

This is maybe the 3rd photoshop illustration i've done, so id really appreciate thurough critiques...

This is an Indus space superiority fighter pilot

analinguist · 09-30-2003, 04:57 AM

a girl with her nipples sliced off and gaping wounds on her breasts?

GoldenOuroboros · 09-30-2003, 05:44 AM

hrmm.. her neck looks long..

hehe.. no but seriously it looks good.. I don't get what the red pocket thingies are? Well what Anal was refering too.. if they're supposed to be divits in the pockets maybe give them some depth on both right and left side of the jacket.. The lighting on the face is done really well

Tasu · 09-30-2003, 09:50 AM

Okay, lemme tell ya what's up with the boobs. That particular type of fatigue is manufactured for women based only on chest circumferance and ignores breast size. On a flat-chested girl, thoes openings would be completely folded and you wouldnt even see the red. Since this girl gots some boobies, the suit expands to accomodate the extra mass. anyway the nipples are actually totally above the slits and it crossed my mind to actually have that as skin... but that didnt really seem like a spacesuit..

analinguist · 09-30-2003, 07:59 PM

maybe you should make the pockets a different color then flesh, because it looks like her boobs are popping out of the outfit?

Goomba · 10-02-2003, 08:09 PM

I like it but, there seems to be something off with the eye size or placement on the head.

esotar · 10-05-2003, 02:21 PM

I like the planet she is flying by, and I like the stern expression on her face. The chest area is just not working, and in fact, her entire flight suit might look cooler as balck with greygreen accents. Her spacepod looks crowded, but I wonder if she ought not be wearing a flight helmet? All in all, her flight suit is very distracting, and the planet is very pretty.

Tasu · 10-05-2003, 05:47 PM

ya i got that off of google

Mr Scorcex · 10-11-2003, 08:03 PM

The shading seems a little heavy, like a halogen on one side of her face, though I may be stupid and that me be the effect you're going for. Aside from that it looks like a cartoon I very much would want to watch.

09-29-2003, 09:56 PM	#1 (permalink)
Tasu Upright	Indus Pilot 8 hours with food and batroom breaks. This is maybe the 3rd photoshop illustration i've done, so id really appreciate thurough critiques... This is an Indus space superiority fighter pilot

09-30-2003, 04:57 AM	#2 (permalink)
analinguist Psycho	a girl with her nipples sliced off and gaping wounds on her breasts? __________________ end

09-30-2003, 05:44 AM	#3 (permalink)
GoldenOuroboros The Cheshire Grin... Location: An Aussie Outback	hrmm.. her neck looks long.. hehe.. no but seriously it looks good.. I don't get what the red pocket thingies are? Well what Anal was refering too.. if they're supposed to be divits in the pockets maybe give them some depth on both right and left side of the jacket.. The lighting on the face is done really well __________________ Can you see me grin grin grrriiiiinnnning?!

09-30-2003, 07:59 PM	#5 (permalink)
analinguist Psycho	maybe you should make the pockets a different color then flesh, because it looks like her boobs are popping out of the outfit? __________________ end

10-05-2003, 02:21 PM	#7 (permalink)
esotar Upright Location: triangle area, nc	I like the planet she is flying by, and I like the stern expression on her face. The chest area is just not working, and in fact, her entire flight suit might look cooler as balck with greygreen accents. Her spacepod looks crowded, but I wonder if she ought not be wearing a flight helmet? All in all, her flight suit is very distracting, and the planet is very pretty. __________________ "Without meditation, where is peace? Without peace, where is happiness?" -- the Bhagavad Gita

09-30-2003, 09:50 AM	#4 (permalink)
Tasu Upright	Okay, lemme tell ya what's up with the boobs. That particular type of fatigue is manufactured for women based only on chest circumferance and ignores breast size. On a flat-chested girl, thoes openings would be completely folded and you wouldnt even see the red. Since this girl gots some boobies, the suit expands to accomodate the extra mass. anyway the nipples are actually totally above the slits and it crossed my mind to actually have that as skin... but that didnt really seem like a spacesuit..

10-02-2003, 08:09 PM	#6 (permalink)
Goomba Tilted	I like it but, there seems to be something off with the eye size or placement on the head.

10-05-2003, 05:47 PM	#8 (permalink)
Tasu Upright	ya i got that off of google

10-11-2003, 08:03 PM	#9 (permalink)
Mr Scorcex Insane Location: Colorado	The shading seems a little heavy, like a halogen on one side of her face, though I may be stupid and that me be the effect you're going for. Aside from that it looks like a cartoon I very much would want to watch.