marsfyre

EDIT(Update): I finished coloring it and some of the suggestions are in place as well as many other small fixes I discovered I needed hehe. so tell me what ya think and critique away so i can do better next time ^_^



OLD TEXT: This is one I just did and am gonna color soon i think(maybe.. who knows?) so I'm postin it here for crits on the proportions(anything would be appreciated as usual) cause I will edit it further(originally 2 of the arms were too long) before I color if I get any good suggestions ^__^

GoldenOuroboros

the guys left foot looks angled wrong and their arms in the middle look a lil long..

But I think you have your own character design and I think it's cool keep it up

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marsfyre

thanx ^_^ I got the foot looking much better now hehe

ARTelevision

yes, I like where you're going with this and I really like the line work. I'd encourage this type of thing because it is the foundation upon which color, when applied, is built.

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analinguist

i think that you should try doing body sketches.. your forms seems to be a little bit off.. alot of people do light sketches of bodies first until they get the proportion and perspectives right.. then go in with your cartoon lines and ink them in so they look more solid.. just an idea.. but i think you should keep it up regardless! nice job.

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marsfyre

just posting a reply cause its been updated. new info(not that theres much of it) is edited into the first post along with the updated picture.

Tasu

Sweet mother....
well you can color good, but your anatomy knowledge seems to be really basic. The girl's face looks like she just crawled out of 3 mile island... like her right eye has mysteriously located itself on the side of her face. Anyway, go to www.polykarbon.com for some super basic structure help (esp on faces).

Also, go read Burne Hogarth's Anatomy, dynamic figure and dynamic drapery, practice for a few years and you'll be able to draw like a mofo

ps, i hate to be mean but that girls face is sooooooooooooooooooooooo bad: it bothers me to no end

marsfyre

I dunno why it is but lately I have been getting lazy drawing faces.. and the bad thing is I don't noticed I fuxed it up royally until way later.. like when u pointed it out I almost shit myself.. XD

analinguist

looking at this again.. i really like the skull on the shirt.

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