yet another peice of character art(inked this time) - Tilted Forum Project Discussion Community

marsfyre · 09-13-2003, 07:35 PM

EDIT(Update): I finished coloring it and some of the suggestions are in place as well as many other small fixes I discovered I needed hehe. so tell me what ya think and critique away so i can do better next time ^_^

OLD TEXT: This is one I just did and am gonna color soon i think(maybe.. who knows?) so I'm postin it here for crits on the proportions(anything would be appreciated as usual) cause I will edit it further(originally 2 of the arms were too long) before I color if I get any good suggestions ^__^

GoldenOuroboros · 09-13-2003, 11:57 PM

the guys left foot looks angled wrong and their arms in the middle look a lil long..

But I think you have your own character design and I think it's cool

keep it up

marsfyre · 09-14-2003, 10:35 AM

thanx ^_^ I got the foot looking much better now hehe

ARTelevision · 09-14-2003, 05:37 PM

yes, I like where you're going with this and I really like the line work. I'd encourage this type of thing because it is the foundation upon which color, when applied, is built.

analinguist · 09-14-2003, 06:50 PM

i think that you should try doing body sketches.. your forms seems to be a little bit off.. alot of people do light sketches of bodies first until they get the proportion and perspectives right.. then go in with your cartoon lines and ink them in so they look more solid.. just an idea.. but i think you should keep it up regardless! nice job.

marsfyre · 09-16-2003, 02:50 PM

just posting a reply cause its been updated. new info(not that theres much of it) is edited into the first post along with the updated picture.

Tasu · 09-16-2003, 10:48 PM

Sweet mother....
well you can color good, but your anatomy knowledge seems to be really basic. The girl's face looks like she just crawled out of 3 mile island... like her right eye has mysteriously located itself on the side of her face. Anyway, go to www.polykarbon.com for some super basic structure help (esp on faces).

Also, go read Burne Hogarth's Anatomy, dynamic figure and dynamic drapery, practice for a few years and you'll be able to draw like a mofo

ps, i hate to be mean but that girls face is sooooooooooooooooooooooo bad: it bothers me to no end

marsfyre · 09-17-2003, 06:45 PM

I dunno why it is but lately I have been getting lazy drawing faces.. and the bad thing is I don't noticed I fuxed it up royally until way later.. like when u pointed it out I almost shit myself.. XD

analinguist · 09-18-2003, 05:37 AM

looking at this again.. i really like the skull on the shirt.

09-13-2003, 07:35 PM	#1 (permalink)
marsfyre Psycho Location: somewhere	Updated: colored - yet another peice of character art(inked this time) EDIT(Update): I finished coloring it and some of the suggestions are in place as well as many other small fixes I discovered I needed hehe. so tell me what ya think and critique away so i can do better next time ^_^ OLD TEXT: This is one I just did and am gonna color soon i think(maybe.. who knows?) so I'm postin it here for crits on the proportions(anything would be appreciated as usual) cause I will edit it further(originally 2 of the arms were too long) before I color if I get any good suggestions ^__^ Last edited by marsfyre; 09-16-2003 at 02:48 PM..

09-13-2003, 11:57 PM	#2 (permalink)
GoldenOuroboros The Cheshire Grin... Location: An Aussie Outback	the guys left foot looks angled wrong and their arms in the middle look a lil long.. But I think you have your own character design and I think it's cool keep it up __________________ Can you see me grin grin grrriiiiinnnning?!

09-14-2003, 05:37 PM	#4 (permalink)
ARTelevision I change Location: USA	yes, I like where you're going with this and I really like the line work. I'd encourage this type of thing because it is the foundation upon which color, when applied, is built. __________________ create evolution

09-14-2003, 06:50 PM	#5 (permalink)
analinguist Psycho	i think that you should try doing body sketches.. your forms seems to be a little bit off.. alot of people do light sketches of bodies first until they get the proportion and perspectives right.. then go in with your cartoon lines and ink them in so they look more solid.. just an idea.. but i think you should keep it up regardless! nice job. __________________ end

09-18-2003, 05:37 AM	#9 (permalink)
analinguist Psycho	looking at this again.. i really like the skull on the shirt. __________________ end

09-14-2003, 10:35 AM	#3 (permalink)
marsfyre Psycho Location: somewhere	thanx ^_^ I got the foot looking much better now hehe

09-16-2003, 02:50 PM	#6 (permalink)
marsfyre Psycho Location: somewhere	just posting a reply cause its been updated. new info(not that theres much of it) is edited into the first post along with the updated picture.

09-16-2003, 10:48 PM	#7 (permalink)
Tasu Upright	Sweet mother.... well you can color good, but your anatomy knowledge seems to be really basic. The girl's face looks like she just crawled out of 3 mile island... like her right eye has mysteriously located itself on the side of her face. Anyway, go to www.polykarbon.com for some super basic structure help (esp on faces). Also, go read Burne Hogarth's Anatomy, dynamic figure and dynamic drapery, practice for a few years and you'll be able to draw like a mofo ps, i hate to be mean but that girls face is sooooooooooooooooooooooo bad: it bothers me to no end

09-17-2003, 06:45 PM	#8 (permalink)
marsfyre Psycho Location: somewhere	I dunno why it is but lately I have been getting lazy drawing faces.. and the bad thing is I don't noticed I fuxed it up royally until way later.. like when u pointed it out I almost shit myself.. XD