PonyPotato

I have a third in the works and some charcoal sketches to photograph, as well. I'm finally back in the artsy fartsy groove.

Both are acrylics on canvas panel.

I think I'm calling this one "Harmony."




And this one.. I'm not sure. I just wanted to finish it. "Identity" perhaps?



Comments/criticisms/suggestions welcome!

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G5_Todd

both are very nice...your talented

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jewels

Very interesting. I could get lost in either one of these.

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PonyPotato

G5_Todd: Thanks! I appreciate it.

jewels443: Thank you. I tend to focus on the details of my paintings rather than the big picture, then I step back and often surprise myself.

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Manic_Skafe

I especially like the first.

Magical.

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PonyPotato

Thank you, Manic_Skafe!

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Plan9

I really like the dark rigid / white flowing aspect of the first one. Body / mind.

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And you know I'm a sucker for hand prints.

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Barstool

As do I. I got lost in trying to figure it all out.

PonyPotato

Crompsin: I also know that you're great. Thanks.

Barstool: Thanks! I appreciate it. I get lost in the details when I'm painting, then the big picture comes together when I step back.

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kramus

That layered interleaved hooking you did on the first one, with the gradiated background to give it more dynamic life is pretty cool. The second one is very confident.
I have always been told to be careful of overly symmetric or centred compositions, so if you do a series of the second perhaps you could find ways of offsetting the hand field. Maybe adjusting it's perimeter to be more fluid, and responsive to the hand shape. I could see using hand position and fluid boundaries to play with the energy within the entire composition. My 2 cents

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PonyPotato

Kramus, once again.. thanks! I appreciate your two cents, I actually have a lot of canvas board waiting to be gessoed and painted, so ideas are always appreciated.

I've sort of always had a thing for symmetry, though I think some of my best work is asymmetrical. I honestly don't usually think out my images ahead of time, they come together as I point them. The second painting originally was totally different, but I decided to paint over it in blue (letting the dot spirals show through) and figure out the rest. Perhaps I should work on creating an image deliberately rather than organically.

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shesus

I used to always sketch and plan out paintings. They are still unfinished and I wasn't happy with them.

Recently, I've just started squirting paint and brushing it all helter-skelter and I like the outcomes better.

I think creativity is the journey of creating a piece of art. Structure can stifle that.

Anyway, I really like these 2 paintings. I enjoy the contrasting work in the first one and the spirals in the second. The hand print is also an interesting addition.

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StellaLuna

They're lovely! I really enjoy the light in the 2nd one-- it feels like the whole painting is going to open up from that point.

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PonyPotato

Thank you, Shesus and StellaLuna! I really appreciate the comments.

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