pinkie

Hey, when I first met my husband it was, Joe, Jacob, Justin, John, Jonathan, Jack, and two other Johns...

bigoldalphamale

he got 99 problems, but a bitch aint one. anymore.

Gabbyness

Interesting.

Rdr4evr

Carno

It would have been a lot more compelling had it been written a little better.

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rukkyg

I thought it was a good and sad story. It made me cry. I hugged my girlfriend.

whocarz

Man, that was cheesy as hell. Poorly written, and went on and on about how she loved him, but he was a dick, blah blah blah. I was laughing by the time I got to the end of this "story". What a load of shit!

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orphen

i'm right there with you whocarz. please cut the maudlin crap... want a good tragedy go read Shakespeare, not some hackneyed semi story. </rant>

Chingal0

Yea, that's fucking stupid.

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sadistikdreams

Damn, I was looking at the pic and i thought it was one of those doubles that you highlight.

Okay, that story is shit.

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Foozboote

Is this a madeup story ? internet wise

pez252

The story started ok but went from getting to know eachother through to falling apart in one line.... That is not a sign of good writing and it took away from any point that was atempted.

oh and i notices a lot of people were asking if it was a made up story or a fake... of course it is. I suppose at some point in the world something like this did happen, but that does not make it true. It was written by someone for some reason. I think it was written because the author was bitter and felt like by writing a story about how there is someone in the world for you and not to miss out on it, it would some how give them hope that they would find that someone.

JumpinJesus

That made me long for the days when lovelorn idiots would make web pages devoted to their internet loves with Savage Garden's "Truly Madly Deeply" embedded as a midi.

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combatmedicjen

What fourth grader wrote that piece of doodoo?? Seriously, there's cheese coming out of my freakin' ears.