I agree with u vonstalhein that the other stanzas are too loong but it was one o my earlier poems so is not my best work I like the other one I posted better
and thank u for the complimate scrappmittens If people keep resoponding like this I may post more
hehe my two fav things to get on my poems - constructive critizem and complimites ahaha
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