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'My heart somehow beats, though cracked to the core
repairing its self, and longing for more'
I like this very ryhtmic style, and the imagery is nice an emo'.
'The incidence of occurence, as sumptuous as it seems,
adversely tipples to the tune, of fond past memories'
I like this especially, but the rest of that piece i thought was a little contrived. I love the word 'sumptious' too, and the theme of differing perception (that i presume is intentionally) lent to the piece by 'as it seems' is evocative. Nice!
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