There are a few lines that really stick out to me. Overall, I just have to say that I enjoy the thoughtfulness and purposefulness in what you do.
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Inevitability -- The man dies and the myth lives on.
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I weep as I watch the night die - the stars are
corrupted into a pale blue sky.
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Favorite line of all:
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Simply looking, I saw the world and it was in pain. Although there was nothing wrong in the world itself. The inhabitants, actions, and emotions of the land had become sour, and the world looked down upon itself.
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I want to see you write more. I like when you encapsulate a moment with the tension of self-realization and the absurdity of the largeness of all aspects of existence.