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Originally posted by The Original King
That's like Penthouse Forum shit.
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I was thinking the same thing!
The whole time, I was wondering if maybe there was going to be a notice at the end that it was erotic fiction from some fetish site...or that he was going to try a career as a smut novelist and was wanting critiques on his work.
Very well written...colorful and descriptive. Just reading it almost gave me a panty fetish!