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Stare At The Sun · 12-27-2003, 04:43 PM

I really enjoyed the piece, i was drawn into it, several great visuals in the piece. A little bit more length would be great, however, that final reaction is great. I also might like to see a little more emotion and reaction from the char's. Just my .02, you might want to have them shoot the shit before going into that deep of a convo, but the way you have it worked out, it does seem realistic.

Good job!

12-27-2003, 04:43 PM	#3 (permalink)
Stare At The Sun Eh? Location: Somewhere over the rainbow	I really enjoyed the piece, i was drawn into it, several great visuals in the piece. A little bit more length would be great, however, that final reaction is great. I also might like to see a little more emotion and reaction from the char's. Just my .02, you might want to have them shoot the shit before going into that deep of a convo, but the way you have it worked out, it does seem realistic. Good job!