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I really enjoy the fact that you use repetative lines, it brings a forceful meaning to your work. I can understand how an emotion can be so bearing on your mind/heart that it freely flows again and again -- an answer to every question that your heart could ask.
I enjoyed the haiku's as well. Although the third gave me quite a smile, I would have chosen the second as the best -- your words are well chosen and placed with precision.
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