I'm pretty sure it's all just in your head. It's like Johnny Reznik said
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When you have writers block...it's not necessarily that what you're writing thats bad...it's that you think it's bad
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The begining sounds like a really great opening. Reminds me of the older classics and how they used to start a film. From there you could probably just have the scream and him falling but then going back in time to events that would lead to that eh? Well anyways it's all you so pay no mind to what I say. You seem pretty creative I'm sure you'll come up with something buddy. Just give it some time. Good luck with that.
Asta!!