motdakasha

Listing quotes of people is hardly evidence. From a writer's standpoint, you need to clearly connect and relate these quotes to your point (thesis). You need to explain why the hell we should care about these quotes and how it proves your theory.

Also:
If you have only ever done good deeds for selfish reasons, that just makes you selfish. Not everyone. If you have done a good deed for a selfless reason, then you are evidence that your theory is flawed.

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