wow, that was really good and really deep! At first I didn't think that it would end that way or that it would be so moving. You are very blunt and forward yet you manage to convey this sense of emotion that many cannot duplicate when trying to write beautifully and eloquently.
My roommate fallen_angel agrees with me too! She thought it was very deep.
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Cain: I know what you're doing. I've lead troops into battle before.
DG: And, how am I doing?
Cain: Well, there's less *hugging* when I do it
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