I like that poem. It says a lot but still seem rather organized. Here's one of my rantings... and there are plenty, but I won't bother you with more than this.
Absolution:
oh, I see your wounds
I know what you did
so brutally sliced and bleeding
a short razorblade romance
oh, I can feel your pain
I’ve done the same thing before
but I can’t see what hurts
oh, if you’d just tell me
I feel you turning away from me
I see your heart getting pierced with pain
still I want to save you, but you
oh you, don’t want to let me in
oh, I see your scars
I know why you did it
long trenches down your arm
they are all healed up
but I don’t know how you feel inside
you still haven’t told me
I know it isn’t easy, oh no
all I wanna do is be there for you
I feel you turning away from me
I see your heart getting pierced with pain
still I want to save you, but you
oh you, don’t want to let me in
oh, I see your soul
so haunted and lost
you’re begging for mercy
you want me to give you absolution
but I cannot go back no more
this dead end road is just a wall of tears
there is nothing more I can do
oh, if you just had told me
I feel you turning away from me
I see your heart getting pierced with pain
still I want to save you, but you
oh you, don’t want to let me in