if the limbs are supposed to be stretched out, i'm not sure how that abstract fits into the overall subject.
The soft focus -blur- is distracting. The eye colored in white doesn't match the basic line styles of the rest of the body. that's what's giving it the south park feel.
the colors need to be sharp and brilliant.
the feet should be smaller and a bit more girly.
this style is more down analinguist's alley. he probably could give better ideas...
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