I like it. When I think of the nightmare you are describing I think of colder colors than the red that the figure has. Expecially with the word icy in there.
The figure doesn't put as much fear as curiosity in me. Perhaps having the figure bathed in a blue light instead of a red would match the description better. Nice work.
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Lord, have mercy on my wicked soul
I wouldn't mistreat you baby, for my weight in gold.
-Son House, Death Letter Blues
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