Thread: An add I made
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Old 07-06-2003, 09:16 PM   #9 (permalink)
yakimushi
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Well, you've probably already turned this in, but the text is very crowded.

I also agree with analinguist on the filters. Thats a pretty generic filter.

Also, the sentence "Don't believe us, or them?" doesn't make sense.
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