Lots of great Haiku here, there's a seperate term for poems that fit the 5-7-5 form, but don't use seasonal references, I just can't remember it right now. That being said here are a few of mine:
I'll just lay my head
on a grassy pillow
and watch the clouds pass
(yeah the second line has 6 syllables, sometimes you have to sacrifice rules for beauty)
Skeletons of trees
give to the october wind
Winter's coming soon
If I told Basho
how much I hated nature
he'd kick my ass hard
(Basho was the first haiku poet)
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