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Old 05-04-2011, 04:57 AM   #11 (permalink)
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Then let's be finished here sharing our heart;
hurting counts even less here than faith.


It can all be finished here between you and I;
remorse and regret here only go so far.


Description and metaphor--finished here and faded;
so too the songs, there and here, and the signals.


Ultimately our past--it is finished here--I and you;
nothing is left unfinished here for us to mourn.

Last edited by HandmeDown; 05-05-2011 at 09:18 AM.. Reason: Corrected grammatical error - goes to go; switched "there and here" for consistent placement of the redundant word
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