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Originally Posted by Raghnar -ITA-
Vancouver Blues has been here for a week and will end a week from now. Crazy times, always running... Experiment, Theory, UBC, Seattle, Talk, Posters, the usual physics stuff. I'm exhausted, as this is the first time I'm taking some time for myself (midnight now, I have to wake up tomorrow at 7, omg :O), and as expected, I'm not feeling good. I'm trying to get better, but it's difficult to...
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As you requested in your signature, I've altered the paragraph in an effort to assist with your English, introducing some colloquialism and formalizing the sentence structure. You were mostly understandable, though the activities of Vancouver Blues are still a mystery, since the words
highlighted in red aren't descriptive enough; they're just words to me, as I'm unfamiliar with the event. I was forced to guess at their meaning.
Noon (or midday, which is less common) is only used for 12pm (12:00), not 12am (00:00), which is midnight.
Additionally, you could elaborate on why you are feeling bad, as it isn't necessarily clear from the information provided. Are you sick or simply tired?
Also,
always running is ambiguous.
You could be constantly running around, which would explain your tiredness.
The event could be constantly running, which suggests that it would make you tired. Lastly,
the people in the event (subject) could be constantly running
the activities (object), such as experiments and the 'usual physics stuff'. What is the subject?
You are the subject:
Crazy times, I've been constantly running around.
Vancouver Blues is the subject:
Crazy times, as it's running nonstop.
The organizers and participants of the Vancouver Blues are the subject:
Crazy times. They're running experiments, explaining theories, and talking about the usual physics stuff.
Anyway, get some sleep, and hopefully you will feel better tomorrow.
