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Old 08-07-2009, 12:53 AM   #6 (permalink)
UnclearContent
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I have no experience grading high school papers but, to me, there's a weird mishmash of correct and incorrect punctuation and spelling. The fact that the first post here is a poll, the first post is something so obviously emotionally charged...I don't know. It doesn't sit right. It feels like a post where the OP intentionally wrote this in a way so it wouldn't sound like him. And the "I love you babygirl" at the end. It feels like pieces, not a real whole.

I may be wrong about the legitimacy, but something still doesn't sit right.
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