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Originally posted by redravin40
Reminds me a bit of Vacchs stuff.
Very civilized but hard at the same time.
A message with a hammer to drive it home.
You have an interesting character in Z and I would be very interested in any back story you have.
How did this man become a lawbreaker and why?
The relationships are well drawn out and you have a feel for dialog.
You say you don't like to rewrite or edit but that is one of the most important parts of writing.
I think a couple of rewrites with some back story could make this a publishable story.
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I just spoke out loud "well holy shit, somehow read it!"
I'm still writing now and should have a fair size follow up. Z gets even more extreeme heh. i am having a ball with this character.
as for editing - i will edit. just not til i'm
done. see? if i go back and start before its' finished it will flop. its happened every time.
thanks for the comment on dialoge. my favorite part always.
ohand Z will have backstory to come, promise!
thanks red!