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Old 12-21-2008, 11:22 AM   #2 (permalink)
ngdawg
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Location: on the back, bitch
Kinda hard on the eyes.
Yo've got a lot of things going on and I don't see a particular point of interest-my eyes go all over. It also needs to be straightened-use the porch post as your guide.
If it was mine, I would eliminate the porch entirely and crop the yard as the image. The snow covered table and chairs, sitting seemingly abandoned, tell a story.
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