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I just realized that you guys responded to this months later.
To answer your question Jet, I didn't revise the story. I ended up writing a new script, but when my teacher gave me a group of terrible actors and two shitty set design students, I said fuck it and just helped with others' projects.
I'll take your criticism into serious consideration if I ever decide to revise the skit, which I just might do if I ever come close to finishing my short fiction collection.
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