The finished piece clearly improved from its earlier state. I love the detailing of the drawing. I really feel you should take the scale of your drawings up. They are amazing but I think they would become more impactful if some of the structures you create were life sized. This draiwng also shows a development in your work from other pieces I have seen. This one, to me, can no longer be put in the illustration only category. I hope one day I will be able to see one of your pieces in person! Good work kramus, keep it up!
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Whether we write or speak or do but look
We are ever unapparent. What we are
Cannot be transfused into word or book.
Our soul from us is infinitely far.
However much we give our thoughts the will
To be our soul and gesture it abroad,
Our hearts are incommunicable still.
In what we show ourselves we are ignored.
The abyss from soul to soul cannot be bridged
By any skill of thought or trick of seeming.
Unto our very selves we are abridged
When we would utter to our thought our being.
We are our dreams of ourselves, souls by gleams,
And each to each other dreams of others' dreams.
Fernando Pessoa, 1918
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