Tirian

I thought I'd post the lyrics to a song. This is my first attempt at lyrics (I don't sing much) and I'd love feedback.

For context, the song is in the style of a 2 verse jazz standard sort of tune. Performed with room for improvised solos etc. which is why it is fairly short lyrically.

Perhaps I should not mention my thoughts, but basically this is a song praising or simply noting the subjects eternal optimism.

You See Spring

[verse]
When the nights turn to frost, and the flowers fade.
When the leaves take wing; You see spring.
When the sun's all but gone, and the nights are long.
When the birds cease to sing; You see spring.

[chorus]
You see silver in the cloud when I see gray.
When I see February, you see May.
When the roadblocks of life get in your way you just say,
When the leaves take wing, I see spring.

[verse]
In the midst of the cold, and the falling snow,
That the cold winds bring; You see spring.
When the stream turns to ice, and the waters slow,
When you see anything; You see spring.

[repeat chorus]