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KellyC · 03-17-2008, 08:10 PM

So I have a portfolio due in a couple days for my online Fictional Writing class. The required length is 20 pages minimum. I have about half done and I need to get a feel of how it's working so I can make appropriate changes.

I decided to write a series of inter-related stories to form a big story, and these stories can be read independently as well.

I'm trying to keep it as simple as possible since the central theme of the stories is about the nostalgia of childhood, sibling relationships, and friends who are like siblings.

So any way, here's the first two.

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KellyC Comment or else!! Location: Home sweet home	Please critique this (warning: long) So I have a portfolio due in a couple days for my online Fictional Writing class. The required length is 20 pages minimum. I have about half done and I need to get a feel of how it's working so I can make appropriate changes. I decided to write a series of inter-related stories to form a big story, and these stories can be read independently as well. I'm trying to keep it as simple as possible since the central theme of the stories is about the nostalgia of childhood, sibling relationships, and friends who are like siblings. So any way, here's the first two. __________________ Him: Ok, I have to ask, what do you believe? Me: Shit happens. Last edited by KellyC; 05-19-2008 at 06:44 PM..