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Old 02-18-2008, 05:22 AM   #10 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by KellyC
What makes this so hard is that I only have one page to write about each type of character. How do I go about doing that?

I thought that if I include more details and show a bit more aspect about a character's life, it would make him more "rounded." That's what I'm trying to go for in scene 1 and scene 2, with the latter being more detailed. But this doesn't seem to be the case.
You're on the right track. There does not need to be actual conflict in the story to create a well-rounded character. On the other hand, a round character does need to have a more developed personality. My method for accomplishing this is to try to put myself in a character's head. What does Bill do for fun (besides listen to Mariners games)? Does he love his wife? What's his job? Does he have retrement plans? Does he hate hippies? Is he a hippie? Once you have a complete character mapped out, just write about him as if he were an actual person. Focus on the character, rather than events or surroundings.

It's very possible to flesh out a character in a single page. The literary snob term for what you're writing is a character study. You're not really telling a story so much as describing a person who just happens to not exist (or at least not in the way you're imagining).
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