I think its good. I'm not dumb, but my attention span is short. I wouldn't call laws specific, I would call them cryptic. Many laws need an appendix to be understood without context. I would hope that the translated laws didn't all start with "Ok dudes." I think the best way to do this would be to provide line by line translations, instead of summarizing them. Summaries are worse than the original text because there are intricacies that need to be understood.
|