The theme is great, almost a take on the killing with kindness. And, though I very much enjoy an edgy poetic story, I did find the chopped phrases distracting.
Well fed am I by the meat of the text, and its worth working to know the piece.
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Holding onto anger is like grasping a hot coal with the intent of throwing it at someone else; you are the one who gets burned. - Buddha
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