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Lasereth
Knight of the Old Republic
Location: Winston-Salem, NC
Damn Mr Flyez you need some serious comma work. You write like English is your second language. Is it? We need some background information. Your sentences don't flow and they're extremely disjointed. Give us some infos!
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