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While you're waiting for a master/expert, I'll throw in a little bit:
mundane finger issue you missed hitting the "l" key in onine ...online.
Excessive/incorrect comma use is common even by otherwise well educated English/American people, so drop the comma after "Whom,". Also, your use of "Whom" is incorrect; I hope you understand this below, which I just cut&pasted from other sources:
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Rule Use the he/him method to decide which word is correct.
he = who
him = whom
Examples Who/Whom wrote the letter?
He wrote the letter. Therefore, who is correct.
For who/whom should I vote?
Should I vote for him? Therefore, whom is correct.
We all know who/whom pulled that prank.
This sentence contains two clauses: We all know and who/whom pulled that prank. We are interested in the second clause because it contains the who/whom. He pulled that prank. Therefore, who is correct.
(Are you starting to sound like a hooting owl yet?)
We want to know on who/whom the prank was pulled.
This sentence contains two clauses: We want to know and the prank was pulled on who/whom. Again, we are interested in the second clause because it contains the who/whom. The prank was pulled on him. Therefore, whom is correct.
Best wishes for continued desire to learn and keep up the energy.
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