I really like the mood of the second portrait. The cropping and the range of highlights make it very appealing. It's too bad the lightest part of the highlights (right part of her face) are blown out. If you have any detail left there I'd try to salvage it in Photoshop and see if you can bring down the overall "very high-key" image to just "high-key"
Regardless...it's a nice portrait.
I like the shed/shack with the wood pallets in front. Also the fish...very cool!