A few suggestions:
that little place in the sky between the clouds
a room with your every desire but no escape
spinning so fast that you see every side at once
natural theme, maybe a tree or a creepy crawly
the cracking of a whip
a favorite unusual smell, leather, cut grass, etc.
a reversal poem, start dark end light or vice versa
the rediculous amount of advertising in the U.S.
-specific example might be nice, mountain dew?
God in an inconspicuous place
Hopefully you'll like at least one of those.
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Maybe the answer is in the very light reflected off our blades. Maybe that's what it means to be this creature known as samurai.
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