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Originally Posted by highthief
I think your first line hurts your paper. "... the government has no right to regulate ...".
The government has every "right". They, in fact, define "right" in the legal sense, and they definitely regulate virtually everything else that citizens consume, one way or another. I'd choose another phrase to make your point.
Did you really use the phrase "BTW" in a paper?
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It's not a "paper" it's an online class where we have "discussions" and the above was done as part of those. The prof asks us the question then we post our replies.
Had this been a true "paper" like the one due next week, it would have been written much more formally and such, this particular reply was written in 10 minutes.
As for the first sentence.... it all depends on your belief in what government is for. I stand by that statement and I demonstrate why I hold that belief throughout the reply.
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I just love people who use the excuse "I use/do this because I LOVE the feeling/joy/happiness it brings me" and expect you to be ok with that as you watch them destroy their life blindly following. My response is, "I like to put forks in an eletrical socket, just LOVE that feeling, can't ever get enough of it, so will you let me put this copper fork in that electric socket?"
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