Well, its about time I got some feedback on the "final" piece. And I love constructive criticism.
Great points all around, bermuDa. The "hero" is definately the car, and I have another version of this (on a computer that is currently down) that addresses almost all of your points, with the exception of a "real" background. I like hearing stuff that was well though out and not just the run of the mill "great stuff, man." type of comments. I'll be reworking this piece again, and will post it later. (probably much later, I have a few projects underway)
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